You either die a hero, or live long enough to see yourself become the villain. Twine games either are left good but unfinished, or they get completed but become bad.
I love this game. The concept of being an entity who shares a body with another character is fun and the writing style is very nice. Already attached to Tobias, he's an endearing character.
Sooo good, usually descriptions of nature are boring to me but the ones in here captivated me. The characters are all so loveable already and I think the character customization aspect is really cool!
That is a very fine introduction to Tobias' travel so far with the ethereal observer companion, accompanied with neat interface design. And it's Old Western scene! Gotta love that ^^
May I ask, tho : do you plan to release new chapter periodically or release the full story all at once?
I like the concept of a supernatural entity that need shares a bond with human in the same body. I'm already falling in love with this story and added it to my collection. Also maybe its too early, but I really like Tobias's playful character LOL.
And for the game itself, do you intended that undo-redo button thingy as permanent as part of the game or will change it later? Just my personal opinion, but it make the choices less impactful when we know if we made bad choice we could just click undo and go back. I hope you get what I mean, because I'm aware that my grammar is terrible :"D Please keep up writing!
Hey, I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far! The history controls may or may not be included in the final game. Right now they're included so that people can experience the different options a bit quicker if they don't feel like replaying over and over, but that may be changed down the line!
This is such a unique and fascinating premise for an IF!! Love what you have so far, I'm already curious about the mysteries you've set up, and can't wait to see where you take the story :D
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How come all of the best twine games aren't finished yet?
You either die a hero, or live long enough to see yourself become the villain.Twine games either are left good but unfinished, or they get completed but become bad.When I downloaded It for offline play It gave me a file :;)
Are you still working on this project? I want to play but I don't want to get attached to an abandoned game ;-;
It may be updated in the future, but I'm not currently working on it.
I have a question, it says it's released, but it's a demo? I don't get it
It is a demo, there are two chapters released.
Alrighty friend! Thanks!
I love this game. The concept of being an entity who shares a body with another character is fun and the writing style is very nice. Already attached to Tobias, he's an endearing character.
Sooo good, usually descriptions of nature are boring to me but the ones in here captivated me. The characters are all so loveable already and I think the character customization aspect is really cool!
Love the game so far! Excited to see more! :)
I really enjoy this game so far, I hope to see more! I like how the setting takes place in Colorado, that's actually where i'm from. ^_^
That is a very fine introduction to Tobias' travel so far with the ethereal observer companion, accompanied with neat interface design. And it's Old Western scene! Gotta love that ^^
May I ask, tho : do you plan to release new chapter periodically or release the full story all at once?
Chapters will be releasing as they're written!
I like the concept of a supernatural entity that need shares a bond with human in the same body. I'm already falling in love with this story and added it to my collection. Also maybe its too early, but I really like Tobias's playful character LOL.
And for the game itself, do you intended that undo-redo button thingy as permanent as part of the game or will change it later? Just my personal opinion, but it make the choices less impactful when we know if we made bad choice we could just click undo and go back. I hope you get what I mean, because I'm aware that my grammar is terrible :"D Please keep up writing!
Hey, I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far! The history controls may or may not be included in the final game. Right now they're included so that people can experience the different options a bit quicker if they don't feel like replaying over and over, but that may be changed down the line!
This is such a unique and fascinating premise for an IF!! Love what you have so far, I'm already curious about the mysteries you've set up, and can't wait to see where you take the story :D
Thank you, I'm so glad you've enjoyed it so far!